[Debconfsubs-team] Fwd: [PATCH] clear up some unintelligible parts

[Thomas Vincent]

And here's Benjamin's patch for his talk.


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Sujet : [PATCH] clear up some unintelligible parts
Date : Thu, 14 Jun 2018 18:06:53 +0200
De : Benjamin Hof <hof at in.tum.de>
Pour : thomas at vinc-net.fr
Copie à : Benjamin Hof <hof at in.tum.de>

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 .../mini-debconf-hamburg/software_transparency.en.srt | 19
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 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git
a/subtitles/2018/mini-debconf-hamburg/software_transparency.en.srt
b/subtitles/2018/mini-debconf-hamburg/software_transparency.en.srt
index 43decb8..677a805 100644
--- a/subtitles/2018/mini-debconf-hamburg/software_transparency.en.srt
+++ b/subtitles/2018/mini-debconf-hamburg/software_transparency.en.srt
@@ -42,16 +42,17 @@ also appreciate any feedback
 you might have.
  10
-00:00:56,402 --> 00:01:00,352
-I'm going to ??? a few motivation of
-what should we care about.
+00:00:56,000 --> 00:00:58,900
+I'm going to start off
+with a few motivational words
  11
-00:01:01,369 --> 00:01:02,913
-In the security of software distribution
+00:00:58,900 --> 00:01:02,600
+why should we care about
+the security of software distribution
  12
-00:01:02,913 --> 00:01:05,672
+00:01:02,600 --> 00:01:05,672
 we already do have
 cryptographic signatures
 @@ -490,7 +491,7 @@ in the list.
  105
 00:08:32,442 --> 00:08:37,116
-If we know the tree root ???,
+If we know the tree root ex ante,
 this works as follows:
  106
@@ -797,7 +798,7 @@ not necessarily do everything
  170
 00:14:12,611 --> 00:14:15,210
-??? communication with
+in live communication with
 the log server.
  171
@@ -1295,7 +1296,7 @@ honest about them like
  276
 00:23:49,608 --> 00:23:51,191
-"yeah we assume ???"
+"yeah we assume all these things"
  277
 00:23:52,732 --> 00:23:55,701
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