[Debian-handbook-translators] review request of fixing minor errors and making some improvements to en-US/*.xml files

[AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke]

Hi Raphael,

Thanks for your quick responce.

> > * change <emphasis role="strong">chapter *</emphasis>
> >   into <emphasis role="strong"><xref linkend="*"/></emphasis>
>
> I don't agree with this, it makes it hard to read because it embeds the
> whole title.
>
> > * remove last comma and colon from <title>
>
> I only kept those changes that applied to sidebar. In <formalpara> it was
> not really hurting and actually it's a straight copy of
> https://www.debian.org/social_contract for most of the cases that you
> changed.
>
> > * add missing <computeroutput> inside <screen>
>
> Here again in many cases it doesn't add value. <computeroutput> is not
> useful, only <userinput> changes the formatting. I kept the changes only
> when it also fixed whitespaces issues (when <screen> was alone
> on its line).

I understand. Thanks for applying the commit.

> Now I'd like to ask you to stop doing minor changes. We have to ship
> the book at some point. If you provide further fixups like those,
> they will be applied to master for the stretch version of the book.

Sorry for causeing you inconvenience.
I'll stop requesting for fixing minor change.

Regards,
Ryuunosuke Ayanokouzi
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AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke <i38w7i3 at yahoo.co.jp>
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