[Debian-live-changes] r2154 - docs/talks/debconf7

[mammadori-guest at alioth.debian.org]

Author: mammadori-guest
Date: 2007-06-17 20:18:20 +0000 (Sun, 17 Jun 2007)
New Revision: 2154

Modified:
   docs/talks/debconf7/live-helper.tex
   docs/talks/debconf7/work.tex
Log:
not more commits today, look at it panthera :-)

Modified: docs/talks/debconf7/live-helper.tex
===================================================================
--- docs/talks/debconf7/live-helper.tex	2007-06-17 19:48:10 UTC (rev 2153)
+++ docs/talks/debconf7/live-helper.tex	2007-06-17 20:18:20 UTC (rev 2154)
@@ -2,12 +2,13 @@
 
 \subsection{live-helper}
 
-\begin{frame}{live-helper}
+\begin{frame}{live-helper}{The Debian-Live builder}
 \begin{itemize}
-	\item is used on the host system
-	\item to build a live system on the local system
+	\item is used on the build system
+	\item it builds a live system ready to deploy \\
+		\commentsize{(.iso and .img images, netboot tarballs)}
 	\item set of generic shell scripts
-	\item not particulary nice for end-users
+	\item not particulary (\emph{yet!}) nice for end-users
 	\item pretty flexible (think: debhelper for live)
 	\item 4 stages (bootstrap, chroot, binary, source)
 	\item autobuilder available on \texttt{http://live.debian.net/}

Modified: docs/talks/debconf7/work.tex
===================================================================
--- docs/talks/debconf7/work.tex	2007-06-17 19:48:10 UTC (rev 2153)
+++ docs/talks/debconf7/work.tex	2007-06-17 20:18:20 UTC (rev 2154)
@@ -25,9 +25,8 @@
 		\item small rootfs
 		\item gzip compressed
 	\end{itemize}	
-	\item The initramfs search for the real rootfs
-	\item it mounts it
-	\item it finally executes \texttt{/sbin/init}\footnote{calls \texttt{run-init}} on the real rootfs 
+	\item The initramfs mount the real rootfs
+	\item Switch to it executing \texttt{/sbin/init}\footnote{calls \texttt{run-init}} on the real rootfs 
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -47,7 +46,7 @@
 
 \begin{frame}{live-initramfs}{Debian-Live initramfs generator}
 \begin{itemize}
-	\item Fork of the debian version of ubuntu's casper\footnote{now a unmaintained, etch only package}
+	\item Fork of the debian version of ubuntu's casper\footnote{now an unmaintained, etch only package}
 	\item \texttt{initramfs-tools} hook
 	\item under heavy cleansing, restructuration and splitting
 	\item Some features: