[SCM] UNNAMED PROJECT branch, master, updated. 20090201-1-45-g46c2aeb

[Chris Lamb]

The following commit has been merged in the master branch:
commit 8af4967fdd151145237a9e906410eb3456e8e965
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Sun Feb 22 14:15:03 2009 +0000

    Fix unweildy grammar in "About this manual"

diff --git a/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml b/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
index 105ed9e..2e9881c 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
@@ -8,14 +8,14 @@
 
 <para>The main goal of this manual is to serve as a single access point to all documentation related to the Debian Live project. It does not include end-user documentation for using a Debian Live system.</para>
 
-<para>Some of the commands mentioned in the text must be executed with superuser privileges, either by becoming the root user or by using <filename>sudo</filename>. To distinguish between commands which may be executed by an unprivileged user and those requiring superuser privileges, commands are prepended by <command>$</command> or <command>#</command> respectively. This symbol is not a part of the command.</para>
+<para>Some of the commands mentioned in the text must be executed with superuser privileges which can be obtained by becoming the root user via <filename>su</filename> or by using <filename>sudo</filename>. To distinguish between commands which may be executed by an unprivileged user and those requiring superuser privileges, commands are prepended by <command>$</command> or <command>#</command> respectively. This symbol is not a part of the command.</para>
 
 <sect2 id="terms">
 <title>Terms</title>
 
 <variablelist>
 <varlistentry><term>Live system</term>
-<listitem><para>An operating system that can boot without installation to a hard drive. Live systems do not alter the local operating system(s) or file(s) already installed on the computer hard drive, unless instructed to do so. Live systems are typically booted from media such as CD's or DVD's, some may also boot with USB sticks or over the network (via netboot images).</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>An operating system that can boot without installation to a hard drive. Live systems do not alter local operating system(s) or file(s) already installed on the computer hard drive unless instructed to do so. Live systems are typically booted from media such as CD's or DVD's, some may also boot with USB sticks or over the network (via netboot images).</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry><term>Debian Live</term>

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