[med-svn] r5577 - trunk/community/papers/11_med-floss_luxemburg

[Michael Hanke]

Author: mih
Date: 2010-12-10 00:59:18 +0000 (Fri, 10 Dec 2010)
New Revision: 5577

Modified:
   trunk/community/papers/11_med-floss_luxemburg/paper-text.tex
Log:
More polishing of the abstract.

Modified: trunk/community/papers/11_med-floss_luxemburg/paper-text.tex
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--- trunk/community/papers/11_med-floss_luxemburg/paper-text.tex	2010-12-09 22:57:13 UTC (rev 5576)
+++ trunk/community/papers/11_med-floss_luxemburg/paper-text.tex	2010-12-10 00:59:18 UTC (rev 5577)
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@
   conflicts in the naming of binaries.
 
   Over the past decade, the integrative
-  \DebianMed project has shown positive effects beyond benefitting
-  regular Debian users alone.
+  \DebianMed project has proven to have positive effects beyond the scope
+  of Debian users.
   Many ties have been established between original software developers
   and Debian package maintainers.  Large development teams started to upload
   their Debian packages directly. That communicated the experience
@@ -29,15 +29,14 @@
   Debian Pure Blends.  Blends, such as Debian Edu, Debian Science,
   DebiChem (chemistry), Debian GIS, DeMuDi \emph{etc.}, were created
   to provide a targeted appearance of the Debian distribution for
-  different domains of applications.  Blends task pages complemented
-  canonical Debian package listing with additional information
-  (e.g. scientific references) and also covered software products
+  different domains of applications.  Today, Blend task pages complement
+  canonical Debian package listings with additional information
+  (e.g. scientific references) and also cover software products
   which are relevant for a given domain, but not yet integrated into
-  Debian.  Combination of Blends teams and Debian sponsorship
-  approaches allowed to significantly eased the way to contribute to
-  Debian, thus making it possible to eliminate necessity for the
-  derived distributions and provide customised versions of Debian,
-  such as \DebianMed, within Debian infrastructure.
+  Debian.  A growing community with continuously improving maintenance
+  procedures ease direct contributions to Debian, thus preventing unnecessary
+  fractioning of the open-source community, and allow for supporting customised
+  versions of Debian, such as \DebianMed, within the Debian ecosystem.
   % the others are inactive enough to not mention them here
 \end{abstract}