[med-svn] r13170 - trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe

[Andreas Tille]

Author: tille
Date: 2013-03-11 13:58:06 +0000 (Mon, 11 Mar 2013)
New Revision: 13170

Modified:
   trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex
Log:
Next paragraph according to Wes' suggestions


Modified: trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex
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--- trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex	2013-03-11 13:45:43 UTC (rev 13169)
+++ trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex	2013-03-11 13:58:06 UTC (rev 13170)
@@ -99,17 +99,19 @@
 spend some money to hire an IT expert who will maintain your IT
 infrastructure and provide the service you need for your work.
 
-\DebianMed is targeting at these service providers to hand over some
-high quality software free of charge with strong ties established to the
-developers.  They do easily have the chance to adapt the code to the
-needs of their clients and can become part of the fascinating world of
-Free Software by providing back their enhancements to the upstream
-developers.  These unique features of Free Software will bring service
-providers selling support for Free Software in medical care in a very
-good position compared to others selling proprietary software:  They can
-provide better service for less money.  Finally the clients in medical
-care will profit as well from the better service for less money and this
-is possibly the way the dream from above might become reality.
+\DebianMed targets at your IT service provider, equipping them with high
+quality software free of charge with strong established ties to the
+community that develops it.  Freely available source code unencumbered
+by proprietary licenses means they can adapt the code to the needs of
+their clients and become part of the fascinating world of Free Software
+by passing back their enhancements to the upstream developers.  These
+unique features of Free Software put those IT service providers selling
+support for Free Software in medical care in a very good position
+compared to those selling proprietary software:  They can provide better
+service for less money.  In the final analysis, their clients in the
+medical professions will profit as well from better service for less
+money, and this where reality approaches, but does not attain, the
+fantasy of a cost-free medical IT system.
 
 Finally we can conclude: \DebianMed tries do be the fundament on which
 you can base a cheaper, more reliable and more flexible IT