[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-42.wml 
Log Message:
Improvements

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/14 10:52:03	1.16
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/14 11:33:52	1.17
@@ -80,15 +80,16 @@
 href="http://bugs.debian.org/release-critical/">release-critical</a> bugs and
 security support.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Debian powers Australias largest Satellite Network.</strong>
-Andre Felipe Machado <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-publicity/2006/12/msg00016.html">pointed</a>
-out that Australias largest internet-by-satellite network "<a href="http://www.nswnet.net/rurallink/">NSW.net Rural Link</a>" is powerd by
-Debian GNU/Linux based routers. In the state of New South Wales there
-are 75 towns linked together with an combination of Wireless LAN and
-satellite based internet uplinks. Debian was <a
+<p><strong>Debian powers Australia's largest Satellite Network.</strong>
+Rodney Gedda <a
 href="http://www.computerworld.com.au/index.php/id;55499617;fp;4;fpid;18">\
-chosen</a> as operating systems for the network routers due to its known
-realiability and ease of package management.</p>
+reported</a> that Australia's largest Internet via satellite <a
+href="http://www.nswnet.net/rurallink/">network</a> is powerd by Debian
+GNU/Linux based routers.  In the state of New South Wales 75 towns spanning
+upwards of 800,000 square kilometres are linked together with a combination of
+wireless LAN and satellite based Internet uplinks. Debian has been chosen as
+operating system for the network routers due to its known realiability and
+ease of package management.</p>
 
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