[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-42.wml 
Log Message:
Final tweaks

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/26 20:12:19	1.32
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/26 20:16:17	1.33
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 see</a> how popular their packages are and where a need for
 additional packages is.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Five years debianforum.de.</strong> On December, 20th the German
+<p><strong>Five Years debianforum.de.</strong> On December, 20th the German
 speaking Debian discussion board <a href="http://www.debianforum.de/">\
 debianforum.de</a> is celebrating its fifth anniversary. Created in late
 2001 by Sebastian Feltel debianforum.de was build upon the ideals and
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 the  third most popular architecture among Debian Linux users who run
 popularity-contest.  NSLU2 Debian installations are easily <a
 href="http://people.debian.org/~igloo/popcon-graphs/index.php?packages=nslu2-utils">\
-tracked</a> and make up 90% of all ARM installations reported by popcon.</p>
+tracked</a> and make up 90&nbsp;% of all ARM installations reported by popcon.</p>
 
 # From: Rainer Dorsch <rdorsch at web.de>
 
@@ -93,11 +93,11 @@
 Rodney Gedda <a
 href="http://www.computerworld.com.au/index.php/id;55499617;fp;4;fpid;18">\
 reported</a> that Australia's largest Internet via satellite <a
-href="http://www.nswnet.net/rurallink/">network</a> is powerd by Debian
+href="http://www.nswnet.net/rurallink/">network</a> is powered by Debian
 GNU/Linux based routers.  In the state of New South Wales 75 towns spanning
 upwards of 800,000 square kilometres are linked together with a combination of
 wireless LAN and satellite based Internet uplinks. Debian has been chosen as
-operating system for the network routers due to its known realiability and
+operating system for the network routers due to its known reliability and
 ease of package management.</p>
 
 # From: Andre Lehovich <andrel at yahoo.com>
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
 href="http://cdimage.debian.org/cdimage/daily-builds/">daily</a> built CD and
 DVD images, including business card and network installation images for
 <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> and  <a href="$(HOME)/releases/sid/">\
-sid</a> for all architectures except for s390.  Building these sets is
+sid</a> for all architectures except for S/390.  Building these sets is
 triggered by the mirror pulse twice a day.  The total build time for all 44
 images is approximately 45 minutes.  Full CD and DVD sets for all
 architectures are <a href="http://cdimage.debian.org/cdimage/weekly-builds/">\
@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/unidesc">unidesc</a>
     &mdash; Tools for finding out what is in a Unicode file.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/mail/urlscan">urlscan</a>
-    &mdash; Extract and browse the URLs contained in an email (urlview replacement).</li>
+    &mdash; Extract and browse the URLs contained in an e-mail.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/utils/vbuf">vbuf</a>
     &mdash; Virtual Ring Buffer library - shell interface.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/utils/vinetto">vinetto</a>
@@ -333,11 +333,11 @@
      (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/404466">Bug#404466</a>)
      </li>
 <li> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/electronics/avra">avra</a>
-     &mdash; Assembler for Atmel AVR microcontrollers.
+     &mdash; Assembler for Atmel AVR micro controllers.
      (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/404467">Bug#404467</a>)
      </li>
 <li> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/electronics/avrp">avrp</a>
-     &mdash; Programmer for Atmel AVR microcontrollers.
+     &mdash; Programmer for Atmel AVR micro controllers.
      (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/404468">Bug#404468</a>)
      </li>
 <li> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/interpreters/drscheme">drscheme</a>