[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-01.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2006/12/27 15:47:28	1.2
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2006/12/27 16:06:31	1.3
@@ -7,17 +7,18 @@
 
 # From: Sebastian Feltel <sebastian at feltel.de>
 
-<p><strong>Debian for the OLPC laptop</strong>Michael Voigt <a
-href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-edu/2006/12/msg00069.html">wondered</a>
-weather Debian is supporting the <a href="http://www.laptop.org/">
-One Laptop per child</a> laptop (OLPC). OLPC which was created by the
-MIT Media Lab is about creating an cheap and affordable laptop for
+<p><strong>Debian and the one Laptop per Child Project.</strong> Michael Voigt
+<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-edu/2006/12/msg00069.html">\
+wondered</a> if Debian is supporting the <a href="http://www.laptop.org/">\
+One Laptop per Child</a> project.  It has ben founded by the <a
+href="http://www.media.mit.edu/">MIT Media Laboratory</a> and is about
+creating an cheap and affordable laptop for 
 children in the third world and developing countries. Petter
-Reinholdtsen <a href=
-"http://lists.debian.org/debian-edu/2006/12/msg00073.html">answered</a>
-that Debian is <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/OLPC">
-participating</a> with its <a href=
-"http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu">DebianEdu</a> sub-project.</p>
+Reinholdtsen <a
+href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-edu/2006/12/msg00073.html">explained</a>
+that Debian is <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/OLPC">\
+participating</a> with its <a
+href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu">DebianEdu</a> sub-project.</p>
 
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