[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-29.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Rob Bradford

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-29.wml	2006/07/18 17:00:57	1.28
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-29.wml	2006/07/18 17:12:04	1.29
@@ -11,8 +11,7 @@
 Hertzog has the <a
 href="http://www.ouaza.com/wordpress/2006/05/26/improving-debian-as-a-whole/">\
 impression</a> that the Debian project is merely trying to keep packages
-up-to-date and that the project is not doing many transversal
-improvements.</p>
+up-to-date and that the project is not making any significant improvements.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Debian Server restored after Compromise.</strong> James Troup <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/07/msg00003.html">\
@@ -56,11 +55,11 @@
 <p><strong>New Wildcard Behaviour of tar.</strong> Bdale Garbee <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg01108.html">explained</a>
 that the new version of <a href="http://packages.debian.org/tar">tar</a>
-incorporates a new behaviour with regards to wildcards passed to the program.
+incorporates a new behaviour with respect to wildcards passed to the program.
 The upstream developers have altered <code>tar</code> in order to make it
 conform to the UNIX98 specification and compatible with the original
 version of the utility.  The change is documented in detail in a special
-<code>News.Debian</code> file.</p>
+<code>NEWS.Debian</code> file.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Packages to be removed.</strong> Kevin McCarty <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-qa/2006/07/msg00XXX.html">updated</a> the
@@ -72,7 +71,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Support for Intel-based Macs.</strong> Junichi Uekawa <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg01210.html">announced</a>
-his effort to foster Debian support for intel-based Mac computers.  Frans Pop
+his effort to foster Debian support for Intel-based Mac computers.  Frans Pop
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg01213.html">added</a>
 that some work has already been done on the <a
 href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer/">installer</a>.  Owners of such machines