[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-30.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-30.wml	2006/07/23 10:41:04	1.14
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-30.wml	2006/07/23 10:42:51	1.15
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
 <p>Welcome to this year's 30th issue of DWN, the weekly newsletter for the
 Debian community.  Christoph Berg <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-qa/2006/07/msg00055.html">\
-implemented</a> a task view for the Debian Developer's Packages
-Overview.</p>
+implemented</a> an overview page for tasks in  the <a
+href="http://qa.debian.org/developer.php">packages overview</a>.</p>
 
 <p><strong>DzongkhaLinux launched.</strong> The Debian project <a
 href="$(HOME)/News/2006/20060719">announced</a> the release of <a
@@ -55,16 +55,17 @@
 
 # From: Mohammed Adnène Trojette <adn+deb at diwi.org>
 
-<p><strong>Release Update Status.</strong> Marc Brockschmidt <a
+<p><strong>Release Status Update.</strong> Marc Brockschmidt <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/07/msg00005.html">\
-commented</a> on the Etch release status. He clarified the
-meaning of the Release Goals, and asked developers to work on
-lowering the number of critical issues affecting the release. <a
-href="http://wiki.debian.org/BSP">Bug Squashing Parties</a> will be
+commented</a> on the <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> release status.
+He clarified the meaning of the release goals and asked developers to work on
+lowering the number of critical issues affecting the release.  Bug squashing
+<a href="http://wiki.debian.org/BSP">parties</a> will be
 organised <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/BSPMarathon">around the
-world</a>. As it looks, Etch will carry 4.0 as version number and
+world</a>. The upcoming release will probably carry 4.0 as version number and
 may include Python 2.4, Linux 2.6.17 or newer, X.org and most of the
-architectures Sarge was released for plus AMD 64.</p>
+architectures <a href="$(HOME)/releases/sarge/">sarge</a> was released for
+plus AMD64.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Security Updates.</strong> You know the drill.  Please make sure
 that you update your systems if you have any of these packages installed.</p>