[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-36.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Kobayashi Noritada

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-36.wml	2006/09/11 06:51:52	1.32
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-36.wml	2006/09/11 07:47:31	1.33
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@
 <p><strong>Package Archive Improvements.</strong> Anthony Towns <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/08/msg00413.html">explained</a>
 that future improvements of the archive software will permit packages to be
-installed directly into the archive.  This removes the <code>accepted</code>
-queue and allows more than one daily archive reorganisation and mirror push.
+installed directly into the archive.  This will remove the <code>accepted</code>
+queue and allow more than one daily archive reorganisation and mirror push.
 However, this will also remove then chance to delete a package from the queue
 before it gets installed which was <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/08/msg00425.html">necessary</a>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 shipped with <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> and replace the old
 <code>cdrtools</code> collection.  This <a
 href="http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/debburn">fork</a> is the result of several
-nearly endless discussions about incompatible licenses used upstream which not
+nearly endless discussions about incompatible licenses used by upstream which not
 only Debian suffered from.  Other vendors are invited to participate in this
 <a href="http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/debburn">effort</a> as well.</p>