[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-37.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Rob Bradford

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-37.wml	2006/09/12 07:42:55	1.22
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-37.wml	2006/09/12 15:49:16	1.23
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
 <p>Welcome to this year's 37th issue of DWN, the weekly newsletter for the
 Debian community.  Debian will be <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-events-eu/2006/09/msg00007.html">present</a>
-at the <a href="$(HOME)/events/2006/0914-wizardsofos">Wizards of OS</a> next
-weekend in Berlin, Germany.  André Luiz Rodrigues Ferreira <a
+at the <a href="$(HOME)/events/2006/0914-wizardsofos">Wizards of OS</a>
+conference next weekend in Berlin, Germany.  André Luiz Rodrigues Ferreira <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/08/msg00510.html">wondered</a>
 if there will be special Debian <a
 href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianDesktopArtwork">themes</a> available for
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 <p><strong>Secure APT Key Management.</strong> Andreas Barth <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-release/2006/09/msg00042.html">summarised</a>
 the <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-release/2006/07/msg00192.html">\
-discussion</a> about key management for apt from July.  The general idea is to have
+discussion</a> about key management for APT from July.  The general idea is to have
 an offline key for signing stable releases per release and a yearly
 rotating key for unstable. Stable release keys will be revoked by
 stable+2, so that updates between stable releases still work with the old
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Using the BTS for License Issues.</strong> Anthony Towns <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-legal/2006/09/msg00011.html">suggested</a>
-to introduce a special licensing tag for reports in the <a
+introducing a special licensing tag for reports in the <a
 href="$(HOME)/Bugs/">bug tracking system</a> (BTS) that claim a package is not
 suitable for distribution due to licensing problems.  Don Armstrong <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-legal/2006/09/msg00023.html">stated</a>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Firefox and Seamonkey.</strong> Mike Hommey <a
 href="http://web.glandium.org/blog/?p=92">called</a> for testers of the new
-Firefox 2.0b2 in experimental.  In other news, work has started on seamonkey.
+Firefox 2.0b2 in experimental.  In other news, work has started on Seamonkey.
 The developer team hopes to be able to provide a full featured package for
 etch so that people using Mozilla on sarge will get a correct upgrade path.
 He has also uploaded a new <a href="http://packages.debian.org/xulrunner">\