[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-38.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Helge Kreutzmann

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-38.wml	2006/09/18 12:12:16	1.22
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-38.wml	2006/09/18 12:25:41	1.23
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 use, and checked out several of the local hostels and public houses for
 suitability.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Hurd with WLAN and PCMCIA.</strong> Michael Banck <a
+<p><strong>The Hurd with WLAN and PCMCIA.</strong> Michael Banck <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-hurd/2006/09/msg00025.html">reported</a>
 that the current GNU Mach upload has brought PCMCIA and WLAN with WEP
 encryption support to Debian GNU/Hurd.  Earlier he <a
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 added</a> that the bottom-up structure instead of top-down is a
 defining feature of Debian.  Raphaël Hertzog <a
 href="http://www.ouaza.com/wordpress/2006/09/03/steering-committee-or-board/">\
-suggested</a> to replace the project leader it with a steering board.</p>
+suggested</a> to replace the project leader with a steering board.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Setting up Subversion.</strong> Bert Heymans <a
 href="http://www.howtoforge.com/debian_subversion_websvn">described</a> in
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/2006/09/msg00190.html">stated</a>
 that the installer team will not accept any structural changes to support
 loading firmware in the installer at this late stage before the release.  In
-the long-term he would also prefer a solution that wouldn't require to add the
+the long-term he would also prefer a solution that wouldn't require adding the
 entire non-free or contrib to the <code>sources.list</code> file.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Using Wikis for Discussions?</strong> Russell Coker <a