[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-39.wml 
Log Message:
Small improvements

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-39.wml	2006/09/23 17:50:17	1.8
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-39.wml	2006/09/23 17:50:41	1.9
@@ -33,12 +33,13 @@
 
 <p><strong>City of Munich migrates to Debian.</p> The City of Munich <a
 href="http://www.muenchen.de/Rathaus/dir/limux/ueberblick/175149/windowsabloesung.html">\
-announced</a> that
+announced</a> (German only) that
 they have started migrating their desktops to a Debian-based computing
 platform.  As part of the project called <a
-href="http://www.muenchen.de/Rathaus/dir/limux/english/147197/">LiMux</a> nearly 14,000
-computers will be running a distribution based on <a
-href="$(HOME)/releases/sarge/">sarge</a> and popular
+href="http://www.muenchen.de/Rathaus/dir/limux/english/147197/">LiMux</a>
+nearly 14,000 computers will be running a distribution based on <a
+href="$(HOME)/releases/sarge/">sarge</a> accompanied by more recent versions
+of popular
 productivity tools like KDE, OpenOffice.org and others.</p>
 
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