<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">2008/12/31 Charles Lepple <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:clepple@gmail.com">clepple@gmail.com</a>></span><br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">
Attached is a patch to hopefully improve the wording of some of the man pages.<br>
<br>
I will commit this in the next few days, but I wanted to give the<br>
driver authors a chance to comment.<br>
<br>
One thing that I feel is important is cross-referencing between the<br>
man pages. On the off-chance that someone does RTFM, it would be good<br>
if we make sure that a user doesn't have to read too far in order to<br>
find out whether the driver man page refers to the serial or USB<br>
driver (and where to go if they are reading the wrong page).<br>
</blockquote><div><br>indeed. That's part of the general Documentation thing!<br><br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">
Summary:<br>
* Update driver list in man/nutupsdrv.8<br>
* Small wording and punctuation changes to man/blazer.8<br>
* Mention man/bcmxcp_usb.8 in man/bcmxcp.8.<br>
* Fix wording of sections written prior to repeater mode. (dummy-ups.8)<br>
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man/bcmxcp.8 | 13 +++++++---<br>
man/bcmxcp_usb.8 | 2 +-<br>
man/blazer.8 | 12 +++++-----<br>
man/dummy-ups.8 | 16 +++++++------<br>
man/nutupsdrv.8 | 62 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------<br>
5 files changed, 71 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)<br>
mode change 100755 => 100644 man/blazer.8<br>
</blockquote><div><br>
I've checked the dummy-ups and nutupsdrv changes, and these are fine.<br>
thanks for the proof reading ;-)<br></div></div><br clear="all">And Happy New Year to you all.<br><br>Arnaud<br>-- <br>Linux / Unix Expert R&D - Eaton - <a href="http://www.eaton.com/mgeops">http://www.eaton.com/mgeops</a><br>
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