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<body class='hmmessage'><div dir='ltr'>Dear Jonas <br><br>Thank u for the comments. I hope that u got some decent sleep in the meantime! I did not know that u had also been the packer of the Debian platform code base ! Awesome. <br>Indeed I can customize the style so as to make it more 'objective' but the approach chosen here is that of an "informed" user of the CION user work platform.<br>The possibility to make it "third person" also depends on content. Gijs mentions various sites, sources, and concept documents that -indeed- would be more appropriate for such approach. <br>I will check it and adjust when I get it.<br><br>Best regards<br><br>Jaap<br><br>> To: Jacques.Verraes@ec.europa.eu<br>> From: dr@jones.dk<br>> CC: parl-user@lists.alioth.debian.org; jaap_verraes@hotmail.com<br>> Subject: Re: RE: [Parl-user] Hangout at Karsmakers Thursday 29th<br>> Date: Wed, 28 May 2014 23:02:49 +0200<br>> <br>> Quoting Jacques.Verraes@ec.europa.eu (2014-05-28 21:50:07)<br>> > I typed out the ideas that came around on the wiki platform created by <br>> > Jonas.<br>> <br>> The wiki is hosted by others in Debian (although I did actually package <br>> its codebase - MoinMoin - and maintained that for 10 years).<br>> <br>> You did great with your first wiki edit.<br>> <br>> I have adjusted only a few structural details - you can see the changes <br>> at https://wiki.debian.org/DebianParl/EC?action=diff&rev2=4&rev1=3 - or <br>> by clicking "info" next to the edit link, and then "find differences").<br>> <br>> At the "info" page you may also notice that others have contributed to <br>> the page as well, already :-)<br>> <br>> Text is written in first person. I understand that matches the request <br>> to "sum all your thoughts up", but that is discourages collaboration (a <br>> "personal" text implies an "owner" and intuitively feels wrong to edit <br>> by anyone else).<br>> <br>> Could the text perhaps be shifted to only have the intro be personal? <br>> Or if this text makes best sense to keep in this personal style, just <br>> keep that point in mind for for future wiki editing :-)<br>> <br>> <br>> > The point in case is to provide users of the Commission IT System a <br>> > secure and reliable environment for their daily work, that is <br>> > under-friendly and gives reasonable guarantees that the texts and <br>> <br>> Not sure, but seems you meant "user-friendly" above.<br>> <br>> <br>> More comments later - I need to sleep now (didn't get much sleep on thr <br>> train last night).<br>> <br>> <br>> - Jonas<br>> <br>> -- <br>> * Jonas Smedegaard - idealist & Internet-arkitekt<br>> * Tlf.: +45 40843136 Website: http://dr.jones.dk/<br>> <br>> [x] quote me freely [ ] ask before reusing [ ] keep private<br> </div></body>
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