r5908 - packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian

[Alexander Schmehl]

Author: tolimar
Date: 2008-02-23 13:13:05 +0000 (Sat, 23 Feb 2008)
New Revision: 5908

Modified:
   packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/changelog
   packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/control
Log:
  * Improve package description as proposed by Christian Perrier
  * Fix copy paste errors in package descriptions refering to ppracer packages



Modified: packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/changelog
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/changelog	2008-02-23 10:29:28 UTC (rev 5907)
+++ packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/changelog	2008-02-23 13:13:05 UTC (rev 5908)
@@ -1,8 +1,10 @@
 extremetuxracer (0.4-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
 
   * NOT RELEASED YET
+  * Improve package description as proposed by Christian Perrier
+  * Fix copy paste errors in package descriptions refering to ppracer packages
 
- -- Alexander Schmehl <tolimar at debian.org>  Thu, 14 Feb 2008 16:28:24 +0100
+ -- Alexander Schmehl <tolimar at debian.org>  Sat, 23 Feb 2008 14:12:04 +0100
 
 extremetuxracer (0.4-1) unstable; urgency=low
 

Modified: packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/control
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/control	2008-02-23 10:29:28 UTC (rev 5907)
+++ packages/trunk/extremetuxracer/debian/control	2008-02-23 13:13:05 UTC (rev 5908)
@@ -22,8 +22,7 @@
  .
  This game is based on the GPL version of the famous game TuxRacer.
  .
- You should have working 3D acceleration for your X or this game will run quite
- slow.
+ You must have working 3D acceleration or this game will run quite slowly.
 Tag: game::arcade, interface::3d, uitoolkit::sdl, use::gameplaying, x11::application
 
 Package: extremetuxracer-dbg
@@ -41,32 +40,31 @@
  .
  This game is based on the GPL version of the famous game TuxRacer.
  .
- You should have working 3D acceleration for your X or this game will run quite
- slow.
+ You must have working 3D acceleration or this game will run quite slowly.
  .
- This package contains the debugging symbols for planetpenguin-racer.
+ This package contains the debugging symbols for extremetuxracer.
 Tag: game::arcade, interface::3d, uitoolkit::sdl, use::gameplaying, x11::application
 
 Package: extremetuxracer-data
 Architecture: all
 Recommends: extremetuxracer
-Description: data files for the game PlanetPenguin Racer
+Description: data files for the game Extreme Tux Racer
  Extreme Tux Racer, or etracer as it is called for short, is a simple OpenGL
  racing game featuring Tux, the Linux mascot. The goal of the game is to slide
  down a snow- and ice-covered mountain as quickly as possible, avoiding the
  trees and rocks that will slow you down.
  .
- It is based on the GPL version of TuxRacer.
+ This game is based on the GPL version of famous game TuxRacer.
  .
  This package contains data like graphics and courses.  If you want to play the
- game, you need to install the package planetpenguin-racer.
+ game, you need to install the package extremetuxracer.
 Tag: game::arcade, interface::3d, role::content:data, special::auto-inst-parts, use::gameplaying, x11::application
 
 #Package: extremetuxracer-gimp-dev
 #Architecture: all
 #Depends: gimp
 #Recommends: extremetuxracer-racer
-#Description: plugins for GIMP for easy development of ppracer courses
+#Description: plugins for GIMP for easy development of etracer courses
 # The courses of Extreme Tux Racer, or etracer as it is called for
 # short, are quite easy to create.  They consist of three graphic files
 # and one textfile.