Bug#630190: [aajm] Broken pronoun "It" (JuggleMaster) in extended description
chealer at gmail.com
Sun Jun 12 05:14:01 UTC 2011
The extended description contains:
A siteswap is a textual representation for patterns one can juggle
(using balls, clubs, etc.). It is mainly useful for understanding
specific siteswaps by animating them (including multiplexing).
The most obvious antecedent of "It" would be "a siteswap", but this
wouldn't make sense. Presumably, "It" actually refers to JuggleMaster,
mentioned in the sentence before:
JuggleMaster is a siteswap animator.
"It" should be replaced with "JuggleMaster".
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