[pkg-kde-commits] rev 2930 - trunk/packages/kdebase/debian/man

[Christopher Martin]

Author: chrsmrtn
Date: 2006-01-17 20:48:55 +0000 (Tue, 17 Jan 2006)
New Revision: 2930

Modified:
   trunk/packages/kdebase/debian/man/startkde.1
Log:
Clarifications and fixups for the new startkde manpage.


Modified: trunk/packages/kdebase/debian/man/startkde.1
===================================================================
--- trunk/packages/kdebase/debian/man/startkde.1	2006-01-17 20:47:49 UTC (rev 2929)
+++ trunk/packages/kdebase/debian/man/startkde.1	2006-01-17 20:48:55 UTC (rev 2930)
@@ -11,15 +11,16 @@
 This manual page was written for the Debian distribution
 because the original program does not have a manual page.
 .PP
-The \fBstartkde\fP program starts up the KDE Desktop Environment and
+The \fBstartkde\fP script starts up the K Desktop Environment and
 is typicaly executed by your login manager (e.g. xdm, gdm, kdm, wdm or from
-your X startup scripts). It will load your last session or a default session
-that includes the standard KDE programs if no saved session is available.
+your X startup scripts). \fBstartkde\fP in turn launches ksmserver, which
+will load your last session, or a default session that includes the standard
+KDE programs if no saved session is available.
 
-\fBstartkde\fP is an standard X11R6 session manager that can manage
+\fBstartkde\fP, with ksmserver, is a standard X11R6 session manager that can manage
 any X11R6 SM compliant program.
 
-\fBstartkde\fP uses the contens of the ~/.kde/ directory
+\fBstartkde\fP and ksmserver use the contents of the ~/.kde directory
 for starting previously saved sessions. Source scripts found in ~/.kde/env/*.sh
 can be used to define environment variables that will be available to all KDE 
 programs.
@@ -27,19 +28,19 @@
 For anything else (that doesn't set env vars, or that needs a window manager),
 better use the ~/.kde/Autostart folder.
 
-At the end of a session scripts found in ~/.kde/shutdown will be executed.
+At the end of a session, the scripts found in ~/.kde/shutdown will be executed.
 
 
 .SH OPTIONS
 \fBstartkde\fP takes no command line options.
 
 .SH AUTHOR
-\fBstartkde\fP is written by the KDE Project
+\fBstartkde\fP is written by the KDE Project.
 
 This manual page was written by Philipp Grau.
 
 .SH "REPORTING BUGS"
 Report bugs of this modified Debian version of startkde to the Bug
-Tracking System at http://bugs.debian.org/
+Tracking System at: http://bugs.debian.org
 .SH COPYRIGHT
 Copyright \(co 2005 Philipp Grau.