r63891 - /website/docs/miniDebConf-paris2010/miniDebConf-paris2010.tex

[gregoa at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: gregoa
Date: Sun Oct 17 22:21:56 2010
New Revision: 63891

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/?sc=1&rev=63891
Log:
minor changes

Modified:
    website/docs/miniDebConf-paris2010/miniDebConf-paris2010.tex

Modified: website/docs/miniDebConf-paris2010/miniDebConf-paris2010.tex
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/website/docs/miniDebConf-paris2010/miniDebConf-paris2010.tex?rev=63891&op=diff
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--- website/docs/miniDebConf-paris2010/miniDebConf-paris2010.tex (original)
+++ website/docs/miniDebConf-paris2010/miniDebConf-paris2010.tex Sun Oct 17 22:21:56 2010
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@
 		\item {\tt sudo apt-get install cowbuilder}
 		\item {\tt sudo cowbuilder --create}
 		\item {\tt sudo cowbuilder --build libfoo-perl\_1.0-1.dsc}
-		\item Can also integrate it into svn-buildpackage.
+		\item Can also be integrated into svn-buildpackage.
 	\end{itemize}
 
 	Check the test suite gets run!
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@
 	\begin{itemize}
 		\item {\tt sudo apt-get install lintian}
 		\item {\tt lintian -iI --pedantic --color=auto libfoo-perl\_1.0-1\_amd64.changes}
-		\item Can also integrate it with debuild/cowbuilder
+		\item Can also be integrated with debuild/cowbuilder.
 	\end{itemize}
 }
 
@@ -325,7 +325,7 @@
 
 	\begin{itemize}
 		\item You are likely to get feedback via IRC or email.
-		\item Sometimes lists of things to do are left for you in debian/changelog by the
+		\item Sometimes lists of TODO items are left for you in debian/changelog by the
 		reviewer, with the suite set back to UNRELEASED.
 		\item Once the reviewer is happy, they will upload the package and
 		tag the release in SVN.