[Pkg-xfce-devel] Bug#531812: xfce4-power-manager: long description no sentence

[Gerfried Fuchs]

Package: xfce4-power-manager
Version: 0.8.0~rc2-4
Severity: minor

        Hi!

 It would be nice if the long description of your package could consist
of full sentences[1], the first part isn't really one.

 I suggest to rewrite it to something along these lines:

| This power manager for the Xfce desktop enables laptop users to set up
| a power profile for two different modes "on battery power" and "on ac
| power" while still allowing desktop users to at least change the DPMS
| settings and CPU frequency using the settings dialogue.

 Please don't forget that this holds for all descriptions of this source
package, not just this one binary package. ;)

 So long, and thanks for your great work nevertheless!
Rhonda
[1] <http://www.us.debian.org/doc/developers-reference/best-pkging-practices#bpp-pkg-desc>