[Publicity-commits] r347 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml

Sat Jun 12 11:26:51 UTC 2010

Author: jbr-guest
Date: Sat Jun 12 11:26:47 2010
New Revision: 347

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/?sc=1&rev=347
Log:
en_GB tweaks

Modified:
    dpn/en/current/index.wml

Modified: dpn/en/current/index.wml
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?rev=347&op=diff
==============================================================================

--- dpn/en/current/index.wml (original)
+++ dpn/en/current/index.wml Sat Jun 12 11:26:47 2010
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@
 <p>Petter Reinholdtsen introduced a new change into the Debian installation
 system allowing the installation of <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/2fly6f0ypze.fsf@login2.uio.no">hardware
-specific packages</a> at installation time (or an already installed
+specific packages</a> at installation time (or on an already installed
 system).  This is useful for certain RAID controllers, graphic adaptors and
-other hardware and done by mapping PCI and USB IDs to the names of Debian
+other hardware, and is done by mapping PCI and USB IDs to the names of Debian
 packages.  Petter welcomes help maintaining this list.</p>
 
 <p>He also pointed out that for hot swappable devices this approach won't
@@ -108,11 +108,11 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-desktop/2010/06/msg00003.html">started</a>
 to collect ideas and proposals for the <a
 href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianDesktopArtworkSqueeze">desktop artwork
-used in Debian 6.0 <q>Squeeze</q></a>.  The artwork should be the base for
+used in Debian 6.0 <q>Squeeze</q></a>.  This artwork would be the base for
 common themes throughout the system.  Yves-Alexis Perez started to <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-desktop/2010/06/msg00004.html">list
-possible usages</a> for that artwork ranging for themes for different
-desktop environments over boot splash screens to website banners.  He also
+possible uses</a> for that artwork ranging from themes for different
+desktop environments through boot splash screens to website banners.  He also
 asked for more comments about the artwork from other users.</p>
 
 
@@ -122,10 +122,10 @@
 <p>Christian Perrier <a 
 href="http://lists.debian.org/20100606071056.GA16165@mykerinos.kheops.frmug.org">proposed</a>
 a <q>string freeze</q> in order to officially notify translators that they should
-consider completing their current work. Christian wrote: <q>During the string 
-freeze, developers would be required to avoid committing changes that involved 
+consider completing their current work. Christian wrote: <q>During the string
+freeze, developers would be required to avoid committing changes that involved
 modifications to localizable strings. Each of these would require a prior 
-discussion in debian-boot and a formal ACK to commit.</q> He proposed Sunday July 4th 
+discussion in debian-boot and a formal ACK to commit.</q> He proposed Sunday July 4th
 as deadline for the string freeze. Time to finish up those translations!
 </p>
 
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/20100609025528.GA19122@pryan.ekaia.org">announced</a>
 the publication of a <a
 href="https://penta.debconf.org/dc10_schedule/events.en.html">provisional list
-of talks</a>. She also mentionned the opportunities for ad-hoc events to be
+of talks</a>. She also mentioned the opportunities for ad-hoc events to be
 scheduled during DebConf, in order to plan a last minute event with others once
 at DebConf. Details on the scheduling of these events will be available at the
 conference.</p>
@@ -175,10 +175,10 @@
 
 <p>Bill Allombert announced that <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/20100606132103.GJ11095@yellowpig">circular
-dependencies in unstable reached an all-time low</a>. Even if some might be too
-intrusive to be fixed for <q>Squeeze</q>, Petter Reinholdtsen noticed that some
+dependencies in unstable reached an all-time low</a>. Even if fixing some might be too
+intrusive for <q>Squeeze</q>, Petter Reinholdtsen noticed that some
 of them may also cause <a 
-href="http://lists.debian.org/2flr5kgozc0.fsf@login2.uio.no">upgrade from
+href="http://lists.debian.org/2flr5kgozc0.fsf@login2.uio.no">upgrades from
 <q>Lenny</q> to <q>Squeeze</q> to fail</a>.</p>
 
 <p>Andrew Pollock blogged about his recent <a
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
 as Debian Developers and two applicants have been
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/E1OJ5es-00033L-A1@ries.debian.org">accepted</a>
 as Debian Maintainer since the previous issue of the Debian
-Project News.  Please welcome Dominique Belhachem, Sylvain Beucler, Scott
+Project News.  Please welcome Dominique Belhachemi, Sylvain Beucler, Scott
 Kitterman, Giovanni Mascellani, Alessio Treglia, Ulises Vitulli,
 Hannes von Haugwitz and Tang Ke into our project!</p>
 


