[Publicity-commits] r1668 - /announcements/en/2011/2011-02-23-cebit.wml

tolimar at users.alioth.debian.org tolimar at users.alioth.debian.org
Wed Feb 23 14:56:31 UTC 2011


Author: tolimar
Date: Wed Feb 23 14:56:30 2011
New Revision: 1668

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/?sc=1&rev=1668
Log:
Review by Meike


Modified:
    announcements/en/2011/2011-02-23-cebit.wml

Modified: announcements/en/2011/2011-02-23-cebit.wml
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/announcements/en/2011/2011-02-23-cebit.wml?rev=1668&op=diff
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--- announcements/en/2011/2011-02-23-cebit.wml (original)
+++ announcements/en/2011/2011-02-23-cebit.wml Wed Feb 23 14:56:30 2011
@@ -1,35 +1,35 @@
+
 # Status: [open-for-edit]
 # $Id$
 # $Rev$
 
-<define-tag pagetitle>Meet Debian at CeBIT 2001</define-tag>
+<define-tag pagetitle>Meet Debian at CeBIT 2011</define-tag>
 <define-tag release_date>2011-02-23</define-tag>
 #use wml::debian::news
 
 
 <p>The Debian Project is happy to announce that it will again be
 represented at this years <a href="$(HOME)events/2011/0301-cebit">CeBIT IT
-fair in Hanover, Germany</a> from the 1st fo the 5th of March.  Following
-the motto <q>Open source keeps the promises of the cloud</q> Debian will
+fair in Hanover, Germany</a> from the 1st to the 5th of March. Debian will
 again be a present as <q>special guest</q> at the booth of <a
-href="http://www.univention.de/en/">Univention GmbH</a> in
+href="http://www.univention.de/en/">Univention GmbH</a>, whose motto this year is
+ <q>Open source keeps the promises of the cloud</q> and which can be found  in
 <a href="http://maps.messe.de/ipar?fid=007&mapType=overview&hallId=2&sizeX=415&sizeY=415&lang=en">hall 2</a>
 <a href="http://maps.messe.de/ipar?fid=007&mapType=detail&hallId=2&standId=D36&sizeX=415&sizeY=415&lang=en">stand
 B36</a>.</p>
 
 <p>Members of the project will be available for questions and discussions
-and show new features of the recently release new version Debian 6.0
+and demonstrate new features of the recently released  Debian 6.0
 <q>Squeeze</q>, including the new port to the kernel of the FreeBSD
-project. Visitors bringing an USB thumb drives or blank CDs can also get a
-free copy of it for the most popular architectures.</p>
+project. Visitors will also have the opportunity to bring USB thumb drives or blank CDs in order to  get a free copy of Debian 6.0.</p>
 
 <p>In addition some of the new features will be presented 
-in a small talk in the <a href="http://www.univention.de/univention/termine/cebit-2011/open-source-buehne/">Univention
+in a short talk at the <a href="http://www.univention.de/univention/termine/cebit-2011/open-source-buehne/">Univention
 Open Source-B&uuml;hne</q> on Tuesday the 1st of March at 13:30 and again
-on Thursday the 3rd of March at 15:30.  A audio stream of the first session
+on Thursday the 3rd of March at 15:30.  An audio stream of the first session
 will be provided by <a
 href="http://blog.radiotux.de/sendeplan/">Radio Tux</a>, who will also
-open their Podcast on Saturday the 5th of March with interviews of Debian
+open their Podcast on Saturday the 5th of March with interviews with Debian
 Developers and Press Officers Meike Reichle and Alexander
 Reichle-Schmehl.</p>
 
@@ -37,16 +37,13 @@
 interested persons to visit the booth and ask questions, discuss technical
 issues and meet the Debian project and its developers in person.</p>
 
-
 <p>We would like to thank our sponsors, notably <a
 href="http://www.univention.de/en/">Univention GmbH</a> and <a
-href="http://messe.de">Deutsche Messe AG</a> for sponsoring our presence at
-this years CeBIT, and the <a href="http://www.tib.uni-hannover.de/en.html">German National Library of
-Science and Technology</a> for the hardware.</p>
+href="http://messe.de">Deutsche Messe AG</a> for again sponsoring Debian's presence at
+this yea'rs CeBIT, and the <a href="http://www.tib.uni-hannover.de/en.html">German National Library of Science and Technology</a> for lending the demonstration hardware.</p>
 
 
 <h2>About Univention</h2>
-
 <p>Univention GmbH was founded in 2002 and is based in Germany. It offers Open
 Source complete solutions, the Debian-based enterprise Linux distribution
 <q>Univention Corporate Server (UCS)</q>, identity- and infrastructure




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