[Publicity-commits] r1713 - /announcements/en/2011/2011-02-29-security-br.wml

[madamezou-guest at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: madamezou-guest
Date: Tue Mar  1 10:51:14 2011
New Revision: 1713

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/?sc=1&rev=1713
Log:
added fixes suggested by taffit

Modified:
    announcements/en/2011/2011-02-29-security-br.wml

Modified: announcements/en/2011/2011-02-29-security-br.wml
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/announcements/en/2011/2011-02-29-security-br.wml?rev=1713&op=diff
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--- announcements/en/2011/2011-02-29-security-br.wml (original)
+++ announcements/en/2011/2011-02-29-security-br.wml Tue Mar  1 10:51:14 2011
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 carries all the security updates of the stable and oldstable releases.</p>
 
 <p>
-<q>In combination with the use of Debian's geo-aware DNS system, this 
+<q>In combination with the GeoDNS feature used by Debian, this 
 should speed up downloads for our users in that geographical area 
 drastically. We are happy we soon can cover all continents with
 dedicated official <code>security.debian.org</code> mirrors, administrated by the 
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@
 <p><q>Debian has many users in South America and we are
 happy to help the Debian project with hardware and bandwidth to
 distribute locally content that was previously available only in the
-northern hemisphere</q>
+northern hemisphere</q> adds
 Carlos Carvalho from <q>Centro de Computa&ccedil;&atilde;o Cient&iacute;fica e Software
-Livre</q> (Center for Scientific Computing and Free Software) added.</p>
+Livre</q> (Center for Scientific Computing and Free Software).</p>
 
 <p>Hosting of the <code>security.debian.org</code> service in Brazil is provided by
 <a href="http://www.c3sl.ufpr.br/">Centro de Computa&ccedil;&atilde;o Cient&iacute;fica e