[Publicity-commits] r1775 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml

jbr-guest at users.alioth.debian.org jbr-guest at users.alioth.debian.org
Sat Mar 12 01:39:59 UTC 2011


Author: jbr-guest
Date: Sat Mar 12 01:39:53 2011
New Revision: 1775

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/?sc=1&rev=1775
Log:
tweaks to para 3, ignoring the grammar error in the quote

Modified:
    dpn/en/current/index.wml

Modified: dpn/en/current/index.wml
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?rev=1775&op=diff
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--- dpn/en/current/index.wml (original)
+++ dpn/en/current/index.wml Sat Mar 12 01:39:53 2011
@@ -79,19 +79,19 @@
 
 <a name="2">
 <h2>Debian named the most important Linux</h2>
-<p>IT-Journalist Bruce Byfield published an article analysing in detail <q>marked
-shares</q> and <a
-href="http://itmanagement.earthweb.com/osrc/article.php/3926941/Linux-Leaders-Debian-and-Ubuntu-Derivative-Distros.htm">influence
-of the Debian distribution</a>.  Gathering various data (e.g. the <a
+<p>IT journalist Bruce Byfield published
+<a href="http://itmanagement.earthweb.com/osrc/article.php/3926941/Linux-Leaders-Debian-and-Ubuntu-Derivative-Distros.htm">an
+article</a> analyzing in detail the <q>market share</q> and influence
+of the Debian distribution. Gathering various data (e.g. the <a
 href="http://distrowatch.com/search.php?category=All&origin=All&basedon=All&notbasedon=None&desktop=All&architecture=All&status=Active">number of
-active Debian derivates</a> according to <a
-href="http://distrowatch.com/">; 63% of these are directly or indirectly
-based upon Debian) he also lists various specialities of Debian and its
-derivatives, he comes to the conclustion that <q>It’s not quite true to say
+active Debian derivatives</a> according to <a
+href="http://distrowatch.com/">DistroWatch</a>; 63% of these are directly or indirectly
+based upon Debian) he also lists various specialties of Debian and its
+derivatives. His conclusion: <q>It’s not quite true to say
 that, if you can think of a specialty, then there is at least one Debian or
 Ubuntu derivative is designed for it. However, it is not much of an
 exaggeration, either.</q>  This was also mentioned on <a
-href="http://slashdot.org/">slashdot</a> titled <q><a
+href="http://slashdot.org/">Slashdot</a> under the title <q><a
 href="http://linux.slashdot.org/story/11/03/05/013205/Debian-Is-the-Most-Important-Linux">Debian is the
 most important Linux</a></q>.</p>
 




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