[Publicity-commits] r1777 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml

Sat Mar 12 01:51:23 UTC 2011

Author: jbr-guest
Date: Sat Mar 12 01:51:15 2011
New Revision: 1777

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/?sc=1&rev=1777
Log:
tweaks all the way up to para 7

Modified:
    dpn/en/current/index.wml

Modified: dpn/en/current/index.wml
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?rev=1777&op=diff
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--- dpn/en/current/index.wml (original)
+++ dpn/en/current/index.wml Sat Mar 12 01:51:15 2011
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
   <li><a href="#4">Bits from the Debian Project Leader</a></li>
   <li><a href="#5">Happy Birthday, FSFE!</a></li>
   <li><a href="#6">Upcoming election for the Debian Project Leader</a></li>
-  <li><a href="#7">Geographical based mirror selection as default?</a></li>
+  <li><a href="#7">Geographical mirror selection as default?</a></li>
   <li><a href="#8">New version of cupt coming up</a></li>
   <li><a href="#9">Bits from ARM and Embedded Sprint</a></li>
   <li><a href="#10">More graphs for the Debian Bug Tracking System</a></li>
@@ -132,8 +132,8 @@
 
 <a name="5"></a>
 <h2>Happy Birthday, FSFE!</h2>
-<p>The <a href="http://fsfe.org">Free Software Foundation Europe</a>
-<a href="http://fsfe.org/news/2011/news-20110310-01">celebrates its 10th
+<p>The <a href="http://fsfe.org">Free Software Foundation Europe</a> is
+<a href="http://fsfe.org/news/2011/news-20110310-01">celebrating its 10th
 birthday</a>!  Congratulations!  To celebrate this important date, it is
 planned to highlight important events in <a
 href="http://fsfe.org/about/history/birthday10">FSFE's history</a>.</p>
@@ -142,35 +142,35 @@
 <a name="6">
 <h2>Upcoming election for the Debian Project Leader</h2>
 <p>Debian Project Secretary Kurt Roeckx published the timeline for this
-years <a
+year's <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/20110304183818.GA24016@roeckx.be">Debian
-project leader elections</a>.  The Nomination period already ended on Friday,
-March 11th.  The current Debian Project Leader
+project leader elections</a>.  The Nomination period has already ended on Friday,
+March 11.  The current Debian Project Leader
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/20110306152941.GA1628@upsilon.cc">Stefano
-Zacchiroli</a> will again candidate.  From Saturday, March 12th till 
-April 1st candidates will campaign and discuss, followed by the
-actualy voting period from Saturday, April 2th, 2011 till Friday, April
-15th 2011.</p>
+Zacchiroli</a> will again be a candidate.  From Saturday, March 12 until
+April 1, candidates will campaign and discuss, followed by the
+actuall voting period from Saturday, April 2, 2011 until Friday, April
+15 2011.</p>
 
 
 <a name="7"></a>
-<h2>Geographical based mirror selection as default?</h2>
+<h2>Geographical mirror selection as default?</h2>
 <p>The topic of using some kind of GeoMirror for new installations has been
 brought up on the <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/201103050951.00942.elmig@debianpt.org">debian-boot</a>
-and later also on the general <a
+mailing list, and later also on the general <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/1299747535.3524.12.camel@havelock.lan">debian-devel</a>
-mailing lists.  Various pro and cons where exchanged including possible
-problems with dnssec and different approaches based upon <a
+list.  Various pro and cons were exchanged including possible
+problems with DNSSEC and different approaches based upon <a
 href="http://packages.debian.org/apt-spy">apt-spy</a> or <a
-href="http://packages.debian.org/netselect-apt">netselect-apt</a> or DNS
-based approaches.  APT Developer Michael Vogt posted some hints, that apt
-recently got a useful feature for similar purpose <a
+href="http://packages.debian.org/netselect-apt">netselect-apt</a>, or DNS
+based approaches.  APT Developer Michael Vogt posted some hints that apt
+recently had a useful feature <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/20110310195547.GA24278@localhost">added</a>
-which allows to specify general <tt>deb mirrors://</tt> line as source for
-apt.  Just the server side is <a
+for a similar purpose, allowing general <tt>deb mirrors://</tt> lines
+to be specified as apt sources.  Just the server side is <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/03/msg00512.html">missing</a>,
-but that's already been <a
+but that's already being <a
 href="20110311112014.GD9247 at anguilla.noreply.org">worked on</a>.</p>
 
 


