[Publicity-commits] r1784 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml

Sat Mar 12 11:33:11 UTC 2011

Author: jbr-guest
Date: Sat Mar 12 11:33:11 2011
New Revision: 1784

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/?sc=1&rev=1784
Log:
second pass

Modified:
    dpn/en/current/index.wml

Modified: dpn/en/current/index.wml
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?rev=1784&op=diff
==============================================================================

--- dpn/en/current/index.wml (original)
+++ dpn/en/current/index.wml Sat Mar 12 11:33:11 2011
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/20110306152941.GA1628@upsilon.cc">Stefano
 Zacchiroli</a> will again be a candidate.  From Saturday, March 12 until
 April 1, candidates will campaign and discuss, followed by the
-actuall voting period from Saturday, April 2, 2011 until Friday, April
+actual voting period from Saturday, April 2, 2011 until Friday, April
 15 2011.</p>
 
 
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/201103050951.00942.elmig@debianpt.org">debian-boot</a>
 mailing list, and later also on the general <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/1299747535.3524.12.camel@havelock.lan">debian-devel</a>
-list.  Various pro and cons were exchanged including possible
+list.  Various pros and cons were exchanged including possible
 problems with DNSSEC and different approaches based upon <a
 href="http://packages.debian.org/apt-spy">apt-spy</a> or <a
 href="http://packages.debian.org/netselect-apt">netselect-apt</a>, or DNS
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
 <p>
 There have also been great improvements in support for <q>multiarch</q>.
 This will make it possible to cross-install libraries from a foreign
-userland, and thus run things like i386 non-free flash on amd64 systems.
+userland, and thus run things like i386 non-free Flash on amd64 systems.
 Cross-building support is also being integrated into Debian itself,
 so developers should soon be able to easily create applications
 on their desktops to run on their ARM devices running Debian.
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
 Zacchiroli</a>, Debian Project Leader; with
 <a
 href="http://frostbitemedia.libsyn.com/this-week-in-debian-episode-20">Jon
-<q>Maddog</q> Hall</a>, about Project Cau&atilde;, and with <a
+<q>Maddog</q> Hall</a>, about Project Cau&atilde;; and with <a
 href="http://frostbitemedia.libsyn.com/this-week-in-debian-episode-21">Adnan
 Hodzic</a>, about Debconf 2011 in Bosnia.
 </p>
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
 Fr&eacute;d&eacute;ric-Emmanuel Picca, Stephen Kitt,
 Higuchi Daisuke, Alberto Garcia, Sergey B Kirpichev, Roland Dreier,
 Miguel Colonn, Pietro Monteiro,
-Boris Du&scaron;ek and Mahyuddin Susanto into our project!</p>
+Boris Du&scaron;ek, and Mahyuddin Susanto into our project!</p>
 
 
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