[Publicity-commits] r3203 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml

[jbr-guest at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: jbr-guest
Date: Sat Feb 18 12:23:05 2012
New Revision: 3203

URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/?sc=1&rev=3203
Log:
first sweep (part 3)

Modified:
    dpn/en/current/index.wml

Modified: dpn/en/current/index.wml
URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?rev=3203&op=diff
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--- dpn/en/current/index.wml (original)
+++ dpn/en/current/index.wml Sat Feb 18 12:23:05 2012
@@ -124,13 +124,13 @@
 <p>
 Holger Levsen wrote a 
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2012/02/msg00023.html">report 
-from the DebConf Video team sprint</a> held last November in Paris,
-France. During the meeting the Video team was be able to work on
+from the DebConf Video Team sprint</a> held last November in Paris,
+France. During the meeting the Video Team was able to work on
 configurations of software and hardware needed for streaming and 
-recording various important events as, for instance, DebConf and FOSDEM.
+recording various important events such as DebConf and FOSDEM.
 <br />
-Holger ended his mail with a thank to IRILL who hosted the meeting and
-provide storage for the hardware when not in use.
+Holger ended his mail with a thankyou to IRILL who hosted the meeting and
+who provide storage for the hardware when not in use.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -165,12 +165,13 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Christian Perrier noted that Beatrice Torracca reported the Debian <a
-href="http://bugs.debian.org/660000">bug #660000</a>.
+Christian Perrier noted that <a
+href="http://bugs.debian.org/660000">Debian bug #660000</a> was reported
+by Beatrice Torracca.
 Beatrice is a long-time Italian translator in Debian (and other
-Free Software project as Italian Linux Documentation Project and
+Free Software project such as the Italian Linux Documentation Project and
 Translation Project) and she's now particularly active in the translation
-of installation messages for Debian packages (aka debconf template). 
+of installation messages for Debian packages (aka debconf templates).
 Well done Beatrice!
 </p>
 
@@ -178,7 +179,7 @@
 <p>There are several upcoming Debian related events:</p>
 <ul>
  <li>March 2-4, Cambridge, UK — <a href="$(HOME)/events/0302-cambridge-bsp">Bug Squashing Party in Cambdrige</a></li>
- <li>March 2-4, Moenchengladbach, Germany — <a href="$(HOME)/events/0302-moenchengladbach-bsp">Bug Squasing Party in Moenchengladbach</a></li>
+ <li>March 2-4, Mönchengladbach, Germany — <a href="$(HOME)/events/0302-moenchengladbach-bsp">Bug Squasing Party in Mönchengladbach</a></li>
  <li>March 10-11, Perth, Australia — <a href="$(HOME)/events/0310-perth-bsp">Bug Squashing Party in Perth</a></li>
 </ul>
 <p>