[Publicity-commits] r3212 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml

[moray at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: moray
Date: Sat Feb 18 21:15:44 2012
New Revision: 3212

URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/?sc=1&rev=3212
Log:
Change wording on comment added by taffit

Modified:
    dpn/en/current/index.wml

Modified: dpn/en/current/index.wml
URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?rev=3212&op=diff
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--- dpn/en/current/index.wml (original)
+++ dpn/en/current/index.wml Sat Feb 18 21:15:44 2012
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@
 the GPL family (including the GPL, the Affero GPL and LGPL), showing a
 constant and significant increase from the previous releases.
 
-The numbers are actually based on a Debian tool, but Russ Allbery
-mentioned that its 
+The numbers in the talk were calculated using an existing Debian tool, but Russ Allbery
+mentioned that it
 <q><a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-publicity/2012/02/msg00048.html">purpose
-isn't designed for that</a></q>, so these numbers can't be trusted as is.
+wasn't designed to be used this way</a></q>, so the current figures are only preliminary.
 </p>
 
 <toc-add-entry name="monetary">Monetary value of Debian <q>Wheezy</q></toc-add-entry>