[Publicity-commits] r3245 - /announcements/en/drafts/dc13-in-switzerland.wml

[jbr-guest at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: jbr-guest
Date: Tue Feb 28 09:59:09 2012
New Revision: 3245

URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/?sc=1&rev=3245
Log:
first pass; restore a couple of lines of content

Modified:
    announcements/en/drafts/dc13-in-switzerland.wml

Modified: announcements/en/drafts/dc13-in-switzerland.wml
URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/drafts/dc13-in-switzerland.wml?rev=3245&op=diff
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--- announcements/en/drafts/dc13-in-switzerland.wml (original)
+++ announcements/en/drafts/dc13-in-switzerland.wml Tue Feb 28 09:59:09 2012
@@ -16,7 +16,8 @@
 #use wml::debian::news
 
 <p>On February 20, 2012, the DebConf committee decided that DebConf13, the Debian
-
+developer conference of 2013, should take place on the shores of the
+Lac de Neuchâtel in Switzerland, most likely in the middle of August.
 More details may be found on the
 <a href="http://wiki.debconf.org/wiki/DebConf13/Switzerland/Bid">organizers' wiki</a>.</p>
 
@@ -25,7 +26,7 @@
 preparing their bids since mid-2011, seeking venues and local sponsors in
 their respective cities and countries. </p>
 
-<p>The two bids had both character and unique identities. On one hand, the
+<p>The two bids both had character and unique identities. On the one hand, the
 Riga proposal was totally centered on city and university life. On the
 other hand, the Swiss bid aimed to bring DebConf to a setting that is
 known for its natural beauty.</p>
@@ -40,15 +41,15 @@
 <p>The DebConf organizers congratulate the future organizers of DebConf13,
 and thank both teams for their efforts.</p>
 
-<p>The venue decision for DebConf14 will be made approximately in twelve
+<p>The venue decision for DebConf14 will be made in approximately twelve
 months. Proposals should be submitted by 31 December 2012 to be eligible for
 consideration.</p>
 
 <h2>About DebConf</h2>
 
 <p>DebConf is the Debian Project's developer conference. In addition to a
-full schedule of technical, social and policy talks, DebConf provides an
-opportunity for developers, contributors and other interested people to
+full schedule of technical, social, and policy talks, DebConf provides an
+opportunity for developers, contributors, and other interested people to
 meet in person and work together more closely. It has taken place
 annually since 2000 in locations as varied as Scotland, Argentina, and
 Bosnia and Herzegovina. More information about DebConf is available from