[Publicity-commits] r2867 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml

[madamezou at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: madamezou
Date: Mon Jan  2 16:02:05 2012
New Revision: 2867

URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/?sc=1&rev=2867
Log:
grammar improved (I hope)

Modified:
    dpn/en/current/index.wml

Modified: dpn/en/current/index.wml
URL: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?rev=2867&op=diff
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--- dpn/en/current/index.wml (original)
+++ dpn/en/current/index.wml Mon Jan  2 16:02:05 2012
@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@
 # $Rev$
 # Status: [open-for-edit]
 
-#
 #
 # Short key IDs are bad news # http://www.asheesh.org/note/debian/short-key-ids-are-bad-news.html
 # (maybe a mention in Other News? is a quite interesting article on GPG)
@@ -71,7 +70,7 @@
 States of America has <a href="http://www.pnas.org/content/early/2011/11/14/1115960108.abstract">a
 paper on the evolution of software in Debian</a>.
 <br />
-If you know studies about Debian and its software, you can add it to our
+If you know other studies about Debian and its software, you can add it to our
 <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/CategoryPublication">related wiki
 page</a>.
 </p>