[Python-apps-commits] r7010 - in packages/slapos.tool.format/trunk/debian (README.Debian)

[arnau at users.alioth.debian.org]

    Date: Friday, April 29, 2011 @ 09:24:30
  Author: arnau
Revision: 7010

Fix typos in README.Debian

Modified:
  packages/slapos.tool.format/trunk/debian/README.Debian

Modified: packages/slapos.tool.format/trunk/debian/README.Debian
===================================================================
--- packages/slapos.tool.format/trunk/debian/README.Debian	2011-04-29 07:48:44 UTC (rev 7009)
+++ packages/slapos.tool.format/trunk/debian/README.Debian	2011-04-29 09:24:30 UTC (rev 7010)
@@ -2,18 +2,17 @@
 ====================
 
 Before  using  slapformat   commands,  you  must  set  up   a  bridge  network
-interface. On  that bridge, you must set  up at least an  IPv6 global address,
+interface. On that  bridge, you must set  up at least an  IPv6 global address,
 even if it is only a localhost one.
 
-On  Debian  systems,  this  is commonly  done  in  ``/etc/network/interfaces''
-file.
+On Debian systems, this is commonly done in ``/etc/network/interfaces'' file.
 
-Note that if you  declare any interfaces as part of the  bridge (when you want
+Note that if  you declare any interface  as part of the bridge  (when you want
 your instances to be available not  only on localhost), you should remove them
 from the configuration file.
 
-Here  is an example  of a  bridge with  static IPv4  address and  private IPv6
-address and with eth0 device:
+Here is  an example of a  bridge on eth0  device with static IPv4  address and
+private IPv6 address:
 
 auto br0
 iface br0 inet static
@@ -26,5 +25,7 @@
 	address fd00::1
 	netmask 64
 
-You can  have a look at bridge-utils-interfaces(5)  and interfaces(5) manpages
+You can have  a look at bridge-utils-interfaces(5)  and interfaces(5) manpages
 for further details.
+
+ -- Arnaud Fontaine <arnau at debian.org>, Fri, 29 Apr 2011 18:23:35 +0900