[Debian-handbook-translators] review request for proofreading of en-US/*.xml files

[Raphael Hertzog]

Hello Ryuunosuke,

On Sun, 27 Sep 2015, AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke wrote:
> I would appreciate it if you review, modify and commit/push it as needed.

Done.

> I might do too much: the context contacting
> "previous sections", "former sections", "following sections", "next sections"
> "last two sections", "next section" and "next few sections"
> are also rewrote using xrefs.

Yes, most of those were overkill, I dropped them. For sidebar it's much
more important because they precise location might vary depending on
layout consideration in the printed book so an explicit xref will give a
good page number...

Cheers,
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