[Debian-handbook-translators] review request for proofreading of en-US/*.xml files

[AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke]

Hi Raphael,

Thanks for the reply.

> > I would appreciate it if you review, modify and commit/push it as needed.
>
> Done.

Thanks.

> > I might do too much: the context contacting
> > "previous sections", "former sections", "following sections", "next sections"
> > "last two sections", "next section" and "next few sections"
> > are also rewrote using xrefs.
>
> Yes, most of those were overkill, I dropped them. For sidebar it's much
> more important because they precise location might vary depending on
> layout consideration in the printed book so an explicit xref will give a
> good page number...

Okay, I understand.
I will be careful of in the future when I report same type of mistakes.

Regards,
Ryuunosuke Ayanokouzi
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AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke <i38w7i3 at yahoo.co.jp>
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