[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-29.wml 
Log Message:
Final tweaks

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-29.wml	2006/07/17 21:32:29	1.22
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-29.wml	2006/07/17 21:38:29	1.23
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #include <joey.style>
 
-<page title="Debian Weekly News #29 -- unreleased">
+<page title="Debian Weekly News #29 -- July 18th, 2006">
 
 <p>Welcome to this year's 29th issue of DWN, the weekly newsletter for the
 Debian community.  Harald Welte <a
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 kernel plus instructions for EZX phones based on Debian sarge.  Raphaël
 Hertzog has the <a
 href="http://www.ouaza.com/wordpress/2006/05/26/improving-debian-as-a-whole/">\
-impression</a> that the Debian project is merly trying to keep packages
+impression</a> that the Debian project is merely trying to keep packages
 up-to-date and that the project is not doing many transversal
 improvements.</p>
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Updated Sarge CD Images with newer Kernel.</strong> Kenshi Muto <a
 href="http://kmuto.jp/b.cgi/debian/d-i-2616.htm">announced</a> updated CD <a
-href="http://www.debian.org/releases/sarge">images</a> for the <a
+href="$(HOME)/releases/sarge">images</a> for the <a
 href="$(HOME)/ports/i386/">i386</a> architecture for <a
 href="$(HOME)/releases/sarge/">sarge</a> that use a more recent kernel.  With
 Linux 2.6.16-15 from <a href="http://www.backports.org/">backports.org</a>
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/utils/gapcmon">gapcmon</a>
     &mdash; Apcupsd monitor GUI.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/haxe">haxe</a>
-    &mdash; Web programming languge generating Flash, AJAX or Neko.</li>
+    &mdash; Web programming language generating Flash, AJAX or Neko.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/gnome/last-exit">last-exit</a>
     &mdash; Last.fm audio player.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/graphics/lphoto">lphoto</a>
@@ -140,19 +140,19 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/ploticus">ploticus</a>
     &mdash; Script driven business graphics package.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/admin/refit">refit</a>
-    &mdash; Graphical bootloader for EFI-based ia32 systems.</li>
+    &mdash; Graphical boot-loader for EFI-based ia32 systems.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/skyeye">skyeye</a>
     &mdash; Embedded Hardware Simulation.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/web/squid3">squid3</a>
     &mdash; Full featured Web Proxy cache (HTTP proxy).</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/utils/syrep">syrep</a>
-    &mdash; Generic file repository synchronization tool.</li>
+    &mdash; Generic file repository synchronisation tool.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/libs/tclxapian">tclxapian</a>
     &mdash; Xapian search engine interface for Tcl.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/web/tikiwiki">tikiwiki</a>
     &mdash; Groupware and content management system.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/web/tntnet">tntnet</a>
-    &mdash; Modular, multithreaded web application server for C++.</li>
+    &mdash; Modular, multi-threaded web application server for C++.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/science/treeviewx">treeviewx</a>
     &mdash; Displays and prints phylogenetic trees.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/games/wormux">wormux</a>