[pkg-apparmor] Contacting Package Maintainer who already ship a profile

[Holger Levsen]

Hi,

On Dienstag, 24. Februar 2015, u wrote:
> Here is a static version of the draft:
> http://paste.debian.net/hidden/c538f32d/

thanks.

s#Read on#Please read on.#

But before I further nitpick I think I should rather make general comments. 
The objective/aim of the mail is a bit unclear I think: why do we mail these 
people? The packages ship profiles, so no action required. There are no bugs 
we are addressing. -> so we are mailing them why?

The answer to that question should be clearer.

Also: it's not really clear why they should usertag "their" bugs, so we can 
fix them. 

"Thus, our team will get notified and then we can try to figure out together 
what went wrong." -> if this is really our main offer, than thus should put in 
the subject. (But I doubt this is the main message...)

I'd also explain/mention that we have usecases + lots of debuggin help in the 
wiki.

Last and maybe least: I wouldnt find it wrong to mention that the 
documentation was greatly improved as part of the outreach-apparmor project or 
maybe _your_ outreach apparmor project :) credit where credit is due! 


And maybe we should send a similar, but different mail to maintainers with 
packages with wishlist bugs for apparmor profiles...


cheers,
	Holger
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