[pkg-apparmor] Contacting Package Maintainer who already ship a profile

[u]

Hello,

Holger Levsen:
> On Dienstag, 24. Februar 2015, u wrote:
>> Here is a static version of the draft:
>> http://paste.debian.net/hidden/c538f32d/

New draft: http://paste.debian.net/hidden/d5577323/ (or
https://lite5.framapad.org/p/mailmaintainers)

> But before I further nitpick I think I should rather make general comments. 
> The objective/aim of the mail is a bit unclear I think: why do we mail these 
> people? The packages ship profiles, so no action required. There are no bugs 
> we are addressing. -> so we are mailing them why?
> 
> The answer to that question should be clearer.

Ok, i think I've made that clearer now.

> Also: it's not really clear why they should usertag "their" bugs, so we can 
> fix them. 

I have changed that section completely.

> "Thus, our team will get notified and then we can try to figure out together 
> what went wrong." -> if this is really our main offer, than thus should put in 
> the subject. (But I doubt this is the main message...)

This has been deleted.

> I'd also explain/mention that we have usecases + lots of debuggin help in the 
> wiki.

Ok.

> Last and maybe least: I wouldnt find it wrong to mention that the 
> documentation was greatly improved as part of the outreach-apparmor project or 
> maybe _your_ outreach apparmor project :) credit where credit is due! 

Yes, but i can't find that this fits really anywhere and would add more
noise to the message which is already quite complicated to convey.

> 
> And maybe we should send a similar, but different mail to maintainers with 
> packages with wishlist bugs for apparmor profiles...

Good idea.

u.