[Python-apps-commits] r9836 - in packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian (3 files)

[plessy at users.alioth.debian.org]

    Date: Tuesday, July 2, 2013 @ 22:11:33
  Author: plessy
Revision: 9836

Description and Debconf messages reviewed by the Smith project.

Closes: #710444
Thanks: Justin B Rye
Thanks: Christian Perrier

Modified:
  packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/changelog
  packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/cloud-init.templates
  packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/control

Modified: packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/changelog
===================================================================
--- packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/changelog	2013-07-02 22:01:38 UTC (rev 9835)
+++ packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/changelog	2013-07-02 22:11:33 UTC (rev 9836)
@@ -3,6 +3,8 @@
   * Added python-requests to build dependencies (Closes: #711797). 
   * Conforms with Policy 3.9.4.
   * Depend on ${python:Depends}.
+  * Description and Debconf messages reviewed by the Smith project.
+    Closes: #710444, thanks to Justin B Rye and Christian Perrier.
   * German translation (Closes: #714738, thanks to Chris Leick).
   * Swedish translation (Closes: #714646, thanks to Martin Bagge).
   * French translation (Closes: #714608, thanks to Julien Patriarca). 

Modified: packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/cloud-init.templates
===================================================================
--- packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/cloud-init.templates	2013-07-02 22:01:38 UTC (rev 9835)
+++ packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/cloud-init.templates	2013-07-02 22:11:33 UTC (rev 9836)
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 Template: cloud-init/datasources
 Type: multiselect
-Default: NoCloud, ConfigDrive, AltCloud, OVF, MAAS, Ec2, CloudStack, None
-Choices-C: NoCloud, ConfigDrive, AltCloud, OVF, MAAS, Ec2, CloudStack, None
-Choices: NoCloud: Reads info from /var/lib/cloud/seed only, ConfigDrive: Reads data from Openstack Config Drive, AltCloud: config disks for RHEVm and vSphere, OVF: Reads data from OVF Transports, MAAS: Reads data from Ubuntu MAAS, Ec2: reads data from EC2 Metadata service, CloudStack: Read from CloudStack metadata service, None: Failsafe datasource
-Description: Which data sources should be searched?
+Default: NoCloud, AltCloud, CloudStack, ConfigDrive, Ec2, MAAS, OVF, None
+Choices-C: NoCloud, AltCloud, CloudStack, ConfigDrive, Ec2, MAAS, OVF, None
+__Choices: /var/lib/cloud/seed only, AltCloud Config Drive, CloudStack metadata service, OpenStack Config Drive, EC2 Metadata service, Ubuntu MAAS, OVF Transports, Failsafe datasource
+_Description: Data sources to read from:
  Cloud-init supports searching different "Data Sources" for information
  that it uses to configure a cloud instance.
  .
- Warning: Only select 'Ec2' if this system will be run on a system with
- the EC2 metadata service present.  Doing so incorrectly will result in
- a substantial timeout on boot.
+ Please note that "EC2 Metadata service" should be used only if
+ the EC2 metadata service is present. Otherwise, it will trigger
+ a very noticeable timeout on boot.

Modified: packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/control
===================================================================
--- packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/control	2013-07-02 22:01:38 UTC (rev 9835)
+++ packages/cloud-init/trunk/debian/control	2013-07-02 22:11:33 UTC (rev 9836)
@@ -42,14 +42,13 @@
          python-software-properties,
          ${misc:Depends},
          ${python:Depends}
-Description: configuration and customization of cloud instances
- Framework and tool written in Python to handle early initialization of a
- cloud instance. Cloud-init can for example set a default locale and a host
- name, generate SSH private host keys, add SSH keys to a user's
- authorized_keys so they can log in, and set up ephemeral mount points.
+Description: initialization system for infrastructure cloud instances
+ Cloud-init provides a framework and tool to configure and customize virtual
+ machine instances for Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) clouds platforms. It
+ can for example set a default locale and hostname, generate SSH private host
+ keys, install SSH public keys for logging into a default account, set up
+ ephemeral mount points, and run user-provided scripts.
  .
- Cloud-init's behavior can be configured via user-data, given by the user at
- instance launch time.
- .
- See upstream project for more details:
- https://help.ubuntu.com/community/CloudInit
+ Various methods are supported for passing data to the instance at launch
+ time, including the standard interfaces of multiple platforms.
+